#Essay 4*



Some people say that the feeling of competition should be encouraged in children, others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What's your opinion?


In this world where people fight for power and wealth, teaching children to cooperate with each other would definitely be a bad idea. My thoughts converge to the point that both are required to maintain a good life for the children of now. This essay will contain the answer to why I think that and my idea to execute them.


Loss of equilibrium cancels the balance, yes, if a child is taught to complete at everything to be great in life, he will start to not care about the people around him. Whereas the kid who learned to cooperate will always resign from questioning his wants. That is if we put both children in one room, one will always have the upper hand in everything provided to them resulting in the loss of balance of goods which In need to be required for both.


Friendly competition is what I think would help in maintaining equilibrium. Teaching students to understand one another and to not back out when it comes to a game or exam. This will help to maintain their competitive spirit and to also help each other out. Encouraging children to play team sports is one good example of friendly competition, when students work together while playing games like volleyball and football they learn to cooperate with team members and to fight as one, multiple games while mixing the team players from both sides becomes a much better way to statistics both competition and cooperation.


In summary, I believe it is best to teach children keep a competitive spirit and also understand each other rather than focus on one idea alone.


This post is a part of Blogchatter Half Marathon 2023

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